"The NAME for the new draft is pretty good!

Even though it's a funny comic, it has fully utilized the advantage of the setting! "

Baiquan Club. Hanako Hanako, one of the editors in charge of LALA's "Flower and Dream", said excitedly as she flipped through Chiaki Chihara's NAME.

On the other hand, Chiaki Kihara wasn't as excited as he had imagined. Instead, he looked listless.

"What's wrong?

Did you not sleep well last night? "Hanako Hanako asked curiously as she pushed up her glasses.

"Hmm … I'm a little insomnia …" Chiaki Chihara said softly as she yawned.

"That won't do!

If it's because you're rushing the draft, then it's better to delay the NAME for this time. "

Hanako Hanako pushed up her glasses sternly. "Initially, the editor didn't agree to let a middle school student draw a comic. However, the quality of your work is indeed excellent. Furthermore, your family members agreed, so the editor decided to let you do it.

However, if it affects your life, then it's not okay! "

"No … I had a chat with a friend last night." Chiaki Chihara rubbed her forehead. "As for the draft, I've already saved up a lot of drafts.

Don't worry about that. Since I've shown it to you, then I'm sure I've already prepared the draft. "

Speaking of which, last night … after she let Nu Liang and Lu Sheng go back first, she chatted with Sayaka Shiroaki for a long time. The main topic of the conversation revolved around Setokurumi.

She spent an entire hour trying to prove that she had no interest in Kawase-kun and had no enmity towards Seto Kurumi. She then spent another hour having a heart-to-heart talk with Sayaka Shirasaki.

During the conversation, Chiaki Chihara more or less understood what was going on.

Sayaka Shiroaki was the daughter of a mafia family while Setokurumi's family was just a small business owner.

Their parents had a good relationship, so her father had asked her to take good care of Setokurumi since she was young. Setokurumi and Setokurumi went to school together since elementary school, and she had always treated Setokurumi as her best friend.

Setokurumi and Sayaka Shiroaki were fundamentally different types of people. Sayaka Shiroaki had a forthright and righteous personality. Since young, she was more open with boys. Her only female friend was Setokurumi. On the other hand, Setokurumi was very petite and cute, which made people want to protect her.

It was just that Sayaka Shiroaki treated Setokurumi as a friend, but Setokurumi did not treat Sayaka Shiroaki with sincerity.

Sayaka Shiroaki did not have any thoughts, she only knew how to beat up those who bullied Setokurumi. This also led to Setokurumi's mentality of using Sayaka Shiroaki.

Setokurumi liked Ryota Hwang Se, but Ryota Hwang Se did not have any feelings for her. This led to this child's temper acting up. She would secretly obstruct every girl who got close to Huang Se and then crazily push the blame to them.

"Don't you think this is too much?"

In a milk tea shop, Chiaki Chihara slowly said while eating the latest coffee jelly.

"Other than her, other girls can't get close to Ryota Hwang Se. Then Huang Se is too pitiful.

Moreover, those who get close to Ryota Hwang Se might not necessarily like him. Is it really okay to do this casually? "

"I know you care a lot about Seto classmate, but you are not helping her by doing this. Instead, you are harming her.

If you continue to spoil her like this, Seto classmate's personality will only worsen. "

"Then what should I do?" Sayaka Shiroaki was at a loss.

"Listen to me. No matter how she treats you in the future, you should not help her anymore." Chiaki Chihara put down the fork in her hand and continued saying.

"Don't bother about the matter of her being given a demerit. If you do something wrong, you should learn to accept the consequences.

Don't push the blame to others. "

"Are you talking about Tsuki Simura?

She did not clean up that night and had already left the school. How can I not know that as the disciplinary committee member? "

"Moreover, what exactly happened, you already know in your heart, right?

What are you lying to yourself about? "

.....

After much persuasion, Sayaka Shiroaki finally gave up on helping Setokurumi. Sayaka Shiroaki's attitude towards her was much better, but she was still vigilant.

The two of them separated after exchanging phone numbers and email addresses. It was already very late, and she still had to go back and organize her NAME for the next day.

Therefore, she did not sleep well that night. The next morning, she woke up with two huge dark circles under her eyes. Her eye bags were also swollen, and she looked very tired.

"In short, you should pay attention to your rest time."

Hanako Hanako organized her NAME and began to give some suggestions for Chiaki Chihara's character design.

"Your character design is very interesting. The identity of the male lead is an alien who is born with superpowers. He is almost omnipotent and likes to act cool. After taking off his glasses, his looks are greatly increased. Actually, I think you can change it a little. The male lead can be set to be more low-profile. After all, our < Hana and Dream > is a female magazine. Most of the girls prefer guys who are low-profile and introverted. His character can be set to 'because he is too strong, he wants to change a place to live a low-profile life' or something like that."

"As for the female lead, your character is a double demon. She is originally a cute girl who is naturally a naive girl, but after being demonized, she will turn into an evil and wild girl … Compared to the simple setting of a naive girl, a more complicated setting is actually better. However, if the setting is too complicated, you have to be prepared to control the character design. Otherwise, it will be easy to destroy the character design!"

"I understand!" Chiaki Chihara nodded.

As expected of Hanako Hanako!

Every time her analysis was so accurate … She would always be able to find some problems that even she could not find.

"Also, don't you think the name < Fantasy Basketball King > is too manicured?"

Hanako Hanako continued, "According to a girl's thoughts, the name should be more girly!"

"For example?"

"For example, < Prince of Basketball > or something like that, what do you think?"

"… Forget about that. I think, if the style is good enough, and the plot is good enough, the name is not that important." Chiaki Chihara shook her head and said.

"Mm, that's fine too, I'm just giving a suggestion."

Hanako Hanako smiled, "Then for the last suggestion, the characters of the protagonists in the first few chapters are very good, but relatively speaking, the supporting characters are too plain.

Your style is very good, and the plot is good, the first few chapters will probably be able to catch the attention of many people.

However, from the next chapter onwards, you can try to add some supporting characters with outstanding characters. "

"Mm, I'll try my best." Chiaki Chihara nodded.

After chatting with Hanako Hanako for a while, she decided to go back. Before leaving, Hanako Hanako asked:

"Speaking of which, do you need an assistant?

During this period of time, you might have to draw two chapters at once, and < Bloom of the Red Spider Lily > won't be finished in a short period of time, it will be very difficult for you, right? "

"I have a friend who can draw manga, he will occasionally help me.

Don't worry. "

Chiaki Chihara tactfully refused, she usually drew manga in This Pill, she couldn't bring her assistant to draw manga in This Pill, right?

Moreover, Brachyceps often came to draw manga for her. Her neighbor in This Pill, codenamed "Nine Sparrows", claimed to be Brother Hua from the Thousand Flower Valley, and also drew manga in China.

The two of them happened to be neighbors, so it was very convenient for them to help each other.

However, just as Chiaki Chihara was about to leave, she unexpectedly bumped into someone's chest.

"Excuse me, is Chiliko Fuuma sensei here?"

A mature and steady boy's voice sounded in Chiaki Chihara's ears. Chiaki Chihara slightly raised her head, and the somewhat serious boy in front of her lowered his head slightly, and met the other's serious eyes.

"The one who bumped into you is her." Hanako Hanako said with a smile.

Chiaki Chihara cautiously took a few steps back, looked at the boy in front of her and said:

"May I ask who you are?

Why are you looking for me? "

"My name is Umetaro Nozaki, pen name is Kuwako Mono, 16 years old, currently serialized in 'Monthly Girl's Romance', 'Come to Love'.

This time, I came to Hakuizumi Club specifically to look for Chiliko Fuuma sensei. "

Chiaki Chihara was a bit nervous … She had heard of Kuwako Mono, although they were not in the same magazine, but she was also a well-known manga artist.

Although she always thought that this manga artist was a girl, she didn't expect him to be such a super serious looking boy.

And from the looks of it, he was only in his first year of high school …

Umetaro Nozaki's hand reached into his clothes, as if he was searching for something.

Was he trying to take something out?

Just as Chiaki Chihara looked at Umetaro Nozaki anxiously, Umetaro suddenly took out an autograph board and a pen, and said excitedly:

"I'm a loyal fan of your manga, 'Blossom of the Other Shore', Fuuma-sensei, please sign for me!"

For a moment, Chiaki Chihara's mind went blank.